LouDevEdits – Manuscript Evaluations and Reports

With a focus on plotting, pace, characters, world-building, and tone, I will read your manuscript and supply thorough feedback with an overall write-up, along with inline notes throughout the text (if a google or word doc is supplied). The reader report will be detailed, looking from both a reader and author perspective. I will also make use of the google doc or word commenting feature to leave my reactions as I go along, and correct any grammar or spelling issues I spot.

My feedback will be detailed, and I will include comments on:

• Individual Character Impressions
• Plotting: flow, pacing, twists, interest
• World-building/ Setting: not just for fantasy, discussions of the world you have created around your characters
• Writing Style: including advice on improvements and a line edit
• Tone: does it fit the genre? Is your voice/ your characters voice strong?
• Overview: including strengths/ weaknesses and brief summary
• Any particular questions you have

I read manuscripts of all fiction genres and lengths (no non-fiction), just get in touch if you’d like to confirm we’re a good fit.

*NO AI please*